Score: 5

"Woggly"

submission: Spaced Out! (Episode 2A)

date: December 4, 2006

The jokes were... much too bland. It looks like you have watched some sort of famous comedy (Red Dwarf), and have done something there, which is a good start, but you really need to make us laugh. Spend MUCH more time on thinking up scripts, if you can't get something spantaneous. Spontenuety usually is more common when your working with one or two other people, but that really slows down the whole picture.
Also, I'd like to protest against the BLATANT copy of the character of cat from Red Dwarf. (I'd like to ask if you watch the english or the watered-down american version. PM me.) Not only is this copy unnacceptable, why couldnt you copy KRYTEN? Or Rimmer? They are much funnier characters.
I liked the way you answered to all your reveiws, or at least the ones of your first episode.
What made me chuckle was the sign in the British ship (Crackers, wensleydale ect.), but that wasn't really part of the animation.
All in all, a good, although bland start. May I suggest using less space orientated storylines, since it is a sort of copy of both Red Dwarf and Space Tree (google it), but also to watch various other comedy shows like Father Ted (Ireland, catholisism and swearing galore)
'Allo 'Allo (Very silly, very french, very "2nd world war-y")
Men Behving Badly (The english one, not the american one)

Thats all! I think you have lots of potential.

Score: 8

"Yubboz seeder."

submission: Smile!

date: August 30, 2006

Hmm...Now, this cartoon, as an idea, could've been taken two (or perhaps more) ways. Either it could come out as a sad, a bit sick and weird, creative but disturbed, innovative, but something that went a bit too far. Or, it could be seen as a funny (but not "funny"), black humour-sort-of-thing. In my eyes it was too disturbing, and the idea was too yucky to follow and appreciate, as it should have been. I believe you should've taken away more depth and blackness, and made it slightly less sinister and agressive. You made the movie, perhaps without knowing it, so the viewer was a "victim". I don't know, but when I watch a flash movie, I want to be a third person. An onlooker, if you like.

If you did make the movie slightly less dark, then the whole idea and concept could come out completely wrong. It would feel fake and staged. You did try to bring back a bit of humour and randomness by involving that sex-scene at the end, which seemed detached and irrelevant. If that scene was more gory (I dunno if thats quite the word I'm looking for...), or completely left out then perhaps the viewer would be left with a darker impression of the flash. But I think that this way feels as if you builtup to a climax, and ending it like that feels like a let-down.

Btw, the have nothing to do with what I think of the flash, because it was near-perfect (the graphics, sound etc.). What I think is what you should be working on is what inpression you want to make? And once you've what impression you want to make it, will you add a sexy scene at the end of it?

Anyway, I wanted to ask, the five guys pressing the buttons, they were robots right? Is that part of the idea? Robots will rule us? I wish I was a robot. Woo....

Blob.

Score: 8

"Yuckxy."

submission: Ragdoll Avalanche II

date: August 26, 2006

For this game to be even better, you should either emphasize on the ragdoll torturing (i.e.: adding more variety in the sharp stuff falling from the ceiling.) or on the game. And because dodging stuff is boring, I'd go for the other one. Yardipoop.

I liked the way you could snip the end of his legs off. Muahahah!